高考模拟作文题解析

高三年级的二模即将来临，今晚昕妈抽空推出一篇作文解析，为小伙伴们加加油！

原题如下图所示:

1.审题。这一步至关重要，是写好考场作文的关键，如果跑题或是没有完全满足题干要求，那么即便你的文字功底再好，也是徒劳无功。

2. 列提纲。建议先列个提纲，这是避免跑题，写出优秀作文的有效策略。有了提纲，作文不仅切题，而且会条理清晰。

3. 谋篇布局。根据提纲谋篇布局，确定文章结构顺序。这道题目要求写植树活动的日记，只要将时间、地点、人物、植树过程以及感受描写清楚即可。

4.顺理成章。经过审题、列提纲、谋篇布局，接下来自然顺理成章。详见下面我写的范文。

March 7 , Sunday                     fine

Today, I am very glad to participate in the activities of Arbor Day organized by the Student Union.

Early in the morning, my classmates and I set out for the park with tools and seedlings. Upon arrival, we immediately began to plant trees together. Some dug the pits, some put the seedlings into the pits and filled them with earth , then others watered them. Through our efforts, the park was loaded with rows of seedlings, standing in the sun.

Exhausted as we were, we tasted the joy of Labour.