【应用文解析】杭州高二期末质检

发布于 2022-06-21 08:57 ，所属分类：在线教育信息快讯

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题目速览：

假定你是李华，你校即将举行年度英文歌会（EnglishSingingParty)。请给外教Johnson写封邮件。内容包括:1.邀请出席；2.活动安排；3.请他表演。

这篇应用文比较简单，仅对部分要点进行讲解：

一、开头四步走：

①是否自我介绍？②是否问候？③背景是什么？④目的是什么？

①不自我介绍，我是这个外教的学生

②问候，我和外教之间不是平辈

③背景：为什么我要邀请这个外教出席表演而不是别人？他擅长/喜欢年度英文歌会

④目的：邀请他参加年度英文歌会

故此开头为：问候+背景+目的

例：Hope this mail finds you well. Knowing that you are fond of English songs, I’m writing to invite you to attend an EnglishSingingParty.

二、正文部分拆解关键词

本文核心词是“EnglishSingingParty”，拆为两部分。其一是“EnglishSinging”，其二是“Party”。那么活动安排就分为“英文歌”和“派对两部分”。另外注意活动的基础要素：时间地点。可以采取“总—分”的结构，例：“The event, scheduled to start next Sunday in the auditorium, will be divided into two parts, which will include English songs singing and delicious food sharing.”

然后就是分点赘述活动，使文章更有调理，例如：

1.For one part, students will sing the well-known English songs, immersing all the staff in the charm of beautiful melodies. For the another, delicious food like dessert, meat, and alike will be served to help you have a taste of the authentic joy of the party. By the way, could you give a finale performance at the event?

三、结尾

期待出席，祝贺玩得开心

We’re anticipating your attendance. And the party would be fabulous if ending with your performance

四、答案范文

Dear Johnson,

This email is to inform you the school's annual English Singing Party is to sound off. We cordially invite you to join us and enjoy it.

The party is scheduled to go from 1:30 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. next Friday in the school theatre. Snacks and fruit will be served at the interval. The singers will surely bring us cheers and energy by performing different songs.

If possible, we'd also like you to do a performance on stage. Please let us know if you are fine with the idea.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

LiHua

五、下水作文

Dear Johnson,

Hope this mail finds you well. Knowing that you are fond of English songs, I’m writing to invite you to attend an EnglishSingingParty.

The event, scheduled to start next Sunday in the auditorium, will be divided into two parts, which will include English songs singing and delicious food sharing. For one part, students will sing the well-known English songs, immersing all the staff into the charm of beautiful melodies. For the another, delicious food like dessert, meat, and alike will be served to help you have a taste of the authentic joy of the party. By the way, could you give a finale[(演出的）终场]performance at the event?

We’re anticipating your attendance. And the party would be fabulous if ending with your performance.

Yours,

Li Hua