2021年中考英语写作话题【新冠病毒】,附高分指导

发布于 2021-04-15 19:18 ,所属分类:知识学习综合资讯

新型冠状病毒无疑是这两年的火爆热点之一,它对我们的学习和生活都产生了很大的影响,很多科目期末考试的时候,都会用它作为考题。


那么它在2021年的中考英语中,是否会以作文的形式出现呢?到目前为止,这还是一个问号。不过,我们可以通过全方位的学习相关内容,增长我们关于这方面的知识,提前去了解一下相关的考题。

范文
Dear Heroes,

Wuhan has suffered from the serious outbreak of COVID-19 over the past three months.Thousands of people have become sick. As ordinary people, what can we do to protect ourselves from the disease? People have been told to stay home. But thousands of brave doctors and nurses have flown to Wuhan to fight the virus. You are saving lives all day and all night. You are cheering up the patients with sweet smiles. With your efforts, I believe we will eventually win this battle.

Unexpected problems occur in our lives from time to time. What we should do is face them with courage. That is what you have taught me.

Thank you very much again, my HEROES!

A Grateful Student From Wuhan
解析
1.题干解读:请你以一名武汉中学生的身份写一封英文感谢信。语言连贯流畅;书写规范;词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型,使文章更加生动形象。
2.范文点评:本文时态为现在完成时态、一般现在时态,人称主要为第一、二人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点:
短语:Thousands of;protect ourselves from the disease;stay home;all day and all night;cheering up;from time to time;Thank you very much 等。
句型:

1.Thousands of people have become sick.
2.As ordinary people, what can we do to protect ourselves from the disease?
3. People have been told to stay home.
4.But thousands of brave doctors and nurses have flown to Wuhan to fight the virus.
5. You are saving lives all day and all night.
02

武汉博物馆已经恢复开放,正在举办“文物系荆楚 祝福满江城”抗击疫情海报特展。班长建议大家可以利用周末时间去参观,拓宽备考热点视角。请以班长的身份向同学们发布参观信息,要点如下:
1. 周二至周日开放,手机上预约参观时间;
2. 排队和参观时保持社交距离,避免聚集;
3. 入馆时需戴口罩、测体温、出示健康码;
4. 结伴出行,乘坐地铁、公汽都可以到达;
5. 请拓展一至两点相关内容。
写作要求:语言连贯流畅;书写规范;格式已给出,词数 80 左右。
提示词:
social distancing 社交距离;
health QR code 健康码;
subway n. 地铁

Dear friends,

The Wuhan Museum has reopened and is holding a special poster exhibition about fighting against the epidemic._____________

Enjoy yourselves!

范文
Dear friends,

The Wuhan Museum has reopened and is holding a special poster exhibition about fighting against the epidemic.I suggested that we should take advantage of the weekend time to visit and broaden the perspective of hot topics in preparation for the examination. Please pay attention to the visit information.First, it is open from Tuesday to Sunday, and the visiting time is reserved on the mobile phone.Second, keep social distance when queuing and visiting to avoid gathering.Third,when entering the library, you need to wear a mask, take your temperature and show your health QR code.Fourth,travel together, you can get there by subway or bus. At last, you should take care of yourself and your own things. And the most important thing is safety.

Enjoy yourselves!
解析
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。请以班长的身份向同学们发布参观信息。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型,使文章更加生动形象。
2.范文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一、二人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点:
短语:a special poster exhibition;against the epidemic;take advantage of the weekend time;pay attention to;avoid gathering.;take your temperature 等。
句型:
1.I suggested that we should take advantage of the weekend time to visit and broaden the perspective of hot topics in preparation for the examination.
2.Please pay attention to the visit information.
3.First,it is open from Tuesday to Sunday, and the visiting time is reserved on the mobile phone.
4.Second, keep social distance when queuing and visiting to avoid gathering.

03

2020年春节期间,我国全国上下展开了防治“新型冠状病毒(novel coronavirus)”的斗争。请根据下面的提示,谈谈如何防治“新型冠状病毒”。
提示:
1. 不去人多场所,尽量不外出,外出要戴口罩;
2. 保持良好的个人卫生习惯:勤洗手;室内通风;
3. 注意均衡饮食,合理锻炼,充分休息;
4. 如有发烧、咳嗽等症状请及时到医院就诊。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥,不要逐句翻译;
2. 文中不得提及考生个人身份的相关信息,如人名、校名或地名等;词数 80 词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:
新型冠状病毒 coronavirus;
口罩 masks


How to prevent novel coronavirus?

Novel Coronavirus is a kind of bad disease. ____________


范文
How to prevent novel coronavirus?

Novel coronavirus is a kind of bad disease.It does harm to people. We must do the following things so that we can prevent it.
First, keep away from the crowd, we’d better not go out, unless we have to. And wearing masks is necessary when going out. Second, we must get into the habit of washing our hands often. We must wash our hands often before meals, after using the washroom and returning from public places, and so on. Third, we must eat different kinds of healthy food and take enough exercise. Have a good rest to keep us strong. Fourth, when we have a high temperature and a cough, we must go to see a doctor as soon as possible, What's more, we should often open windows to let the fresh air in.

I’m sure we can stop novel coronavirus.
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目属于提纲式作文,需要学生在根据材料提示写作同时,适当添加词句,使得文章更加连贯通畅。
2.范文点评:文章介绍防治新冠肺炎的方法,因此通篇都使用的是一般现在时。文章紧扣要点,内容完整,表述准确,运用了大量的句型和固定短语,使得文章内容丰富且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点:
短语:do harm to…;keep away from…;had better not do sth.;get into the habit of doing sth;as soon as possible;what’s more等。
句型:so that引导的目的状语从句;unless引导的条件状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句:be sure后跟宾语从句等。

04

假如你是李华,学校英语角正在开展以“Three-Year Challenge”为主题的演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,谈谈三年来的成长。
内容:
1. 自我介绍;
2. 成长经历(生活、学习、挑战等);
3. 将来打算。
要求:
1. 可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数:80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.必用词汇:used to, try one’s best, make progress, be proud of, look forward to

Three-Year Challenge

Hello, everyone! What is the difference between who you are today and you were three years ago? I’m happy to be here to share my experience with all of you today.

First, let me introduce myself. _________________

Thank you for listening!


范文

Three-Year Challenge

Hello, everyone! What is the difference between who you are today and you were three years ago? I’m happy to be here to share my experience with all of you today.

First, let me introduce myself.My name is Li Hua. I'm fourteen. My favorite subject is English. I won the first prize in English competition last month. But I used to be very shy and afraid to exchange my ideas with my classmates. I made up my mind to become more outgoing. I tried my best to express my own thoughts as much as possible. Luckily, with the help of my friends, I have made great progress.

Looking back on the past three years, I am very proud of myself. Now I am looking forward to the next three years. I hope I can achieve more and finally realize my dream to be an English teacher in the future.

Thank you for listening!
解析
1. 题干解读:本题属于演讲稿,题目的开头已给出。根据题目要求写一些自我介绍,成长经历(生活、学习、挑战等),将来打算。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 范文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的范文。范文紧扣题目要求,介绍了自己的名字,经验、年龄以及未来相当一名老师。范文结构清晰,行文连贯,恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡,增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点:词组:won the first prize;last month;used to be;made up my mind;tried my best;as much as possible;with the help of;made great progress
句型:But I used to be very shy and afraid to exchange my ideas with my classmates./ I tried my best to express my own thoughts as much as possible./ Looking back on the past three years, I am very proud of myself.

05

一根据所给情景或提示,用英文写一篇 80 词左右的短文。

现在,越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”(Homework Help App)来查找家庭作业答案。对此, 学校在学生中进行了相应的问卷调查,请根据下面表格内容完成调查报告。

Homework Help App becomes more and more popular among the students in China. Is it helpful to us students? We did a survey on it in our school.
________________________

范文

Homework Help App becomes more and more popular among the students in China. Is it helpful to us students? We did a survey on it in our school.

Some students think it’s very convenient to find out answers through Homework Help App. They can finish their homework as soon as possible, so they may spend their spare time taking part in some interesting activities. On the other hand, some children disagree. They believe it’s easier for them to get used to searching instead of thinking. They will depend more heavily on Homework Help App. Also, it seems hard for them to tell whether the answers are right or not.

In my opinion, it’s not a good idea to deal with our homework through the App. It’s better for us to learn and think by ourselves. We can make great progress by thinking, but we can’t by searching. Besides, it does great harm to our eyes to use mobile phones too much. In a word, we should make proper use of Homework Help App.
【解析】
1.题干解读:
该题目属于议论文写作。学校针对“作业帮”这一软件在学生中进行了问卷调查,要求学生补全表格并把调查结果写成英语作文。
2.范文点评:范文采用三段式;时态采用一般现在时;第一段引出“作业帮”这个主题,第二段根据问卷调查结果,分条讲述它的优点和缺点,第三段阐述自己的看法。
3.高分亮点:
短语:

be helpful to;do a survey;as soon as possible;on the other hand;get used to;depend on;deal with;make great progress;in a word;make use of
句型:
more and more+形容词;
It is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.;宾语从句。

提示:
1. 参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
4. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

The Spring Festival in 2020

To stop the spread of COVID-19, __________


Possible version One;

To stop the spread of COVID-19, most of us Chinese spent our Spring Festival at home. All of us had an unusual holiday.

In the past, I often visited relatives and friends or went travelling during the festival. This year, I spent more time with my family and I felt we got much closer. I also spent some time surfing the Internet because I wanted to know how COVID-19 was going and how we should protect ourselves. At the same time, I was deeply moved by those brave doctors and kind people.

My wish for the new year is that the outbreak will be over soon and all of us can go back to our normal lives.

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