初中英语常用书面写作方法及七年级写作范文

一. 英语书面表达探究

1.写作前

不可急于动笔，要先审题，列出要点，写出提纲。接下来，脑海中确定文章的体裁与时态。

初中阶段所接触的体裁主要有：记叙文、应用文、议论文及说明文。其中，应用文又包括信件、电子邮件文稿、寻物启示、失物招领、请假条、留言条、通知等不同的形式，这些都是生活中常用的。

至于时态，要依据表达的内容来灵活应用。初中阶段较常用的主要时态有：一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。其他时态多为必要时穿插使用。平时有必要积累一些有代表性的，与生活贴近的文章，用以参考。

2.写作中

动笔前要有清晰的轮廓，即上述的要点、体裁、时态，并可回顾一下已学过的类似篇目。但在考试时，最好不要直接写在试卷上，以免修改时涂改太多。在时间充足的前提下，先写在草稿纸上为宜。

写作中应注意三大问题：文章所要求的格式，逻辑顺序和遣词造句。我们主要研究下格式的运用与过渡性和连接性词汇的运用。

（1）常见格式

① 信件的格式：

Dear Betty，

Thank you for your last letter. Here are…

Love，

② 电子邮件的格式：

Subject：My dog From：Thomas＼&Nancy，

Good news！I have a new pet…

Thomas

③ 日记的格式：

Friday，April 10th Fine

Today our school held a sports meeting on the playground…

（2）写作中的遣词造句

① 使用熟悉的、已掌握的词汇和句型；少用难拼写的词及复合句（亮点句需用自己熟记的掌握的）。

② 学会用同义词及同义句替换不会写的词句。

③ 使用过渡性、总结性的词汇。如：

文章及段落起始的用语：to begin with，first of all

表示先后次序的词：first，second，then，next，finally

表示因果关系的词：so，because，as

表示并列关系的词：and，or

表示转折关系的词：but，however

表示举例的词：for example，such as，on the one hand，on the other hand

表示总结性的词：in fact，in a word，in general

④ 多用固定词组，为文章增色。

⑤ 直接用英语表达，避免用汉语思维。

⑥ 简单发挥，不能脱离中心。

⑦ 符合字数要求。

3.写作后

在草稿纸上完成文章后，不要立即誊写在试卷上，以下几步也极其重要。

① 再次查看题目要求，看有无遗漏。

② 看语言是否通顺，语法是否正确。包括大小写、标点、时态、语态、主谓一致及词语搭配等。

③ 查看字数是否符合要求。通常要求为100字左右。

④ 认真书写于试卷上。字迹规范、美观，卷面整洁。

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经历了这样的三步曲，写作任务基本结束。此外，学生还应了解老师怎样把握评判尺度。以满分为15分为例，可参看以下五个档次的评分细则。

一级（13-15分）

1. 所写内容符合所提供的各种信息，有创意；

2. 句子正确通顺，或只有个别小错；

3. 单词拼写错误不超过4个。

二级（10-12分）

1. 所写的内容与所提供的各种信息基本符合；

2. 句子基本正确。表达错误较少，表达较通顺；

3. 单词拼写错误不超过6个。

三级（7-9分）

1. 所写的内容与试卷所提供的信息基本相符；

2. 句子表达错误较多，但尚可读懂；

3. 单词拼写错误不超过10个。

四级（4-6分）

1. 所写内容与试卷提供的信息不符；

2. 只有少数句子表达正确；

3. 拼写错误在10个以上。

五级（3分以下）

只有个别词语可读，但通篇不知所云。

二.七年级常用写作案例

✎.一My Family

My name is Claire and I’m in my fourteen years old. I live a happy life because I have a warm and harmonious family.

There are four people in my family. They are my parents、my elder brother and me. My parents both are teachers so that my brother and I have been well educated. I am four years younger than my brother who always cares much about me. We have a good relationship, though we quarrel and even fight sometimes. Actually, I am likely to consider it as a sign of love.

In one word, I really love my family. How about yours?

【汉语翻译】我的家庭

我的名字叫克莱尔,我十四岁了。我过着快乐的生活,因为我有一个温暖和谐的家庭。

我家有四口人，他们是我的父母、我的哥哥和我。我的父母都是教师,我和我哥哥都受过良好教育。我比我哥哥小四岁，他总是非常关心我。我们有良好的关系,尽管有时我们争吵甚至打架。事实上,我可能会认为这是爱的象征。

总之,我真的很爱我的家人。你的家庭怎么样?

✎. 二. My School

Hello! Welcome to our school. Let me show you around.

My school is beautiful, it is in Cheng gu.School classroom is capacious, also extremely clean. Our teacher is friendly to us. We have lessons in our classroom.Our teachers plan their lessons in the office. Our school learning environment is good.

I study in school and I'm very happy.

I love my school!

【汉语翻译】我的学校

你好!欢迎来到我们学校。让我带你四处看看。

我的学校是美丽的,它是在顾城。学校的教室宽敞,也非常干净,我们的老师对我们很友好。我们在我们的教室上课。我们的老师在办公室计划他们的教训。我们学校的学习环境很好。

我在学校学习,我很高兴。

我爱我的学校!

✎. 三. To Introduce Myself

Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. I'm a 15-year-old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao. I'm an active, lovely, and clever girl.

In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.

I also like sports very much, such as running, volleyball and so on. I'm kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!

OK. This is me.A sunny girl.

【汉语翻译】自我介绍

大家好，我的名字是温妮。我是一个15岁的女孩。我住在美丽的城市日照。

我是一个活跃的,可爱的,聪明的女孩。在学校我最喜欢的科目是数学。也许有人认为它很难学好，但我喜欢它。我相信如果你尽你最大的努力,一切都可以做得很好。

我也很喜欢运动，例如跑步、排球等等。我很善良，如果你需要帮助,请到我这里来。我希望我们能成为好朋友!

好吧，这就是我，一个阳光明媚的女孩。

✎. 四. How to Learn English Well

English is one of the most important subjects in a middle school. Almost everyone knows that we should learn English well, but few of us know how to learn it well.

Karl Marx has set a good example for us. He once said, When one is learning a foreign language, he must use the foreign language. In this way, he could use several languages. A the saying goes, practice makes perfect. When we learn English, we should read more, speak more, listen to English from time to time and practise writing every day.

Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Only in this way can we learn it well.

【汉语翻译】如何学好英语

英语是中学最重要的科目之一。几乎每个人都知道我们应该学好英语,但很少有人知道如何去学好它。

卡尔·马克思为我们树立了一个好榜样。他曾经说过,当一个人是学习一门外语时,他必须使用外语。通过这种方式,他可以使用几种语言。正如一句谚语所说,熟能生巧。当我们学习英语时,我们应该多读,多说,听英语,每天练习写作。

不要害怕犯错误，只有用这种方法我们才能学好英语。

✎. 五. My Best Friend

Blair is my classmate as well as my best friend.We have already known each other for ten years.

We live in the same block so that we always go to school together. She has long hair, big eyes and sweet smile, which makes her popular in my class. Blair works hard and she is a good student in the eyes of teachers. Besides, she is clever and kind-hearted. When others turn to her for help, she always tries her best to help.

I feel proud to have such a good friend.

【汉语翻译】我最好的朋友

布莱尔是我的同学以及我最好的朋友。我们已经认识十年了。

我们住在同一个街区,我们总是一起去上学。她有长头发,大眼睛,嘴角挂着甜美的微笑,这些使得她在我们班很受欢迎。布莱尔努力学习, 在老师眼中，她是一个好学生。除此之外,她很聪明和善良。当别人向她求助时,她总是试着最好的帮助。

我为有这样一位好朋友而感到自豪。

✎. 六. The Way to Keep Healthy

It's important for us to be healthy in our life. We can't study or work well without healthy body.

There're many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet.

Finally, we must remember: Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise.

【汉语翻译】保持健康的方式

在生活中，健康对我们来说是很重要的。如果没有健康的身体，我们就不能很好地学习和工作。

有许多方法来保持健康。首先,我们应该每天坚持锻炼身体。我们可以走路上学,而不是坐公共汽车。放学后,我们可以花一个小时玩球类运动。如果我们住在高楼,我们可以走上楼或下楼。第二,我们应该有一个均衡的饮食。

最后,我们必须记住:早睡早起是保持健康、富有和聪明。

✎.七.以Introduction About Myself为题，写一篇简短的自我介绍。

【参考范文】Introduction About Myself

Hello, everyone, now Iwant to give you an introduction about myself. My name is Gina Green. Gina is my first name and Greenis my family name.I am a girl at the age of 12.Ilike chatting on the Internet（上网）,and my QQ number is 7845362. What's yours?

【汉语翻译】自我介绍

嗨，大家好，现在我想给你们做一个自我介绍。我叫吉娜•格林。吉娜是我的名字，格林是我的姓氏。我是一个12岁的女孩。我喜欢在网上聊天，我的QQ号是7845362。你的呢？

✎.八.以My English Teacher为题，写一篇短文。

【参考范文】My English Teacher

Miss Wang is my English teacher. She looks very young. She's aboutthirty years old, and she wears glasses. She's funny. But she is strict withus. She wants usto study hard. Her lessons are interesting. We are very happyin her class and we all likeher lessons. She is a good teacher, and we all like her.

【汉语翻译】我的英语老师

王老师是我的英语老师。她看起来很年轻。她大约三十岁，她戴眼镜。她很有趣。不过，她严格要求我们。她要我们努力学习，她的课很有意思。在她的课上，我们非常快乐，我们都喜欢她的课。她是一位好老师，我们都喜欢她。

✎.九.以My Friend为题，写一篇短文。

【参考范文】My Friend

I have a good friend. Her name is May. She is 12 years old. Her telephone number is 87634966.Herbirthday is March 5th. She is good at English and Chiese.She often plays the piano. She likes reading books and listening to the music. Her hobbiesare reading and listening to music. She is a nicegirl. We often help each other. We are good friends.

【汉语翻译】我的朋友

我有一个好朋友。她的名字叫梅。她12岁。她的电话号码是87634966 。她的生日是3月5日。她擅长英语和汉语。她经常弹钢琴。她喜欢看书和听音乐。她的爱好是读书和听音乐。她是一个好女孩。我们经常互相帮助。我们是好朋友。

✎.十.假设你是李枚，假设有下面的照片是你的全家福，请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。

【参考范文】My Family

Hello,everyone! I'm Li Mei. Look! This is my family photo. This is my grandmother. She is 58. This is my father. He is a teacher. He is 36，and my mother is 36，too. Who’s that boy? Oh, he is my brother. He is 13 and I am 12. My brother and I are students.

【汉语翻译】我的一家

大家好！我是李梅。看！这是我的全家福。这是我的祖母。她58岁。这是我的父亲。他是一名教师。他36岁，我的母亲也是36岁。那个男孩是谁？哦，他是我哥哥。他13岁，我12岁。我的哥哥和我都是学生。

✎.十一.假设这是TOM的房间，请你用80词左右介绍他的房间。

【参考范文】Tom’s Room

Look! This is Tom’s room. His photos are on the wall. His T-shirt is on the bed. His baseball bat is behind the dresser. The keys are in the drawer. The computer is on the desk. Where is Tom’s baseball? Oh, It’s under the bed. What is on the floor? They are Tom’s shoes, socks and computer games. What do you think of Tom’s room?

【汉语翻译】汤姆的房间

瞧！这是汤姆的房间。他的照片挂在墙上。他的T恤在床上。他的棒球棒在梳妆台后面。钥匙在抽屉里。计算机在书桌上。汤姆的棒球在哪里？哦，在床底下。地板上是什么？它们是汤姆的鞋子、袜子和电脑游戏。你觉得汤姆的房间怎么样？

✎.十二.用英语谈谈你对电影的看法。

【参考范文】

Of all kinds of movies, I like comedies best. I thinkthey'reinteresting.My favorite actor is Jackie. I like his movie King of Comedy. I think it’s a successful comedy. For action movies, I like The Lord of the Ring best. It’s exciting. I like documentaries because they’re true stories. I like only some thrillers. Many thrillers are scary and boring.

【汉语翻译】

在各种各样的电影中，我最喜欢喜剧片。我认为它们很有趣。我最喜欢的演员是成龙。我喜欢他的电影“喜剧之王”。我认为这是一个成功的喜剧。至于动作片，我最喜欢“指环王”。它令人兴奋。我喜欢纪录片，因为他们是真实的故事。我只喜欢一些恐怖片。许多恐怖片都太恐怖和无聊。

✎.十三.请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的周末生活。

【参考范文】

I have a good weekend.On Saturday morning，I do my homework. After lunch, I go shopping with mymother. At about five o’clock, I go to play basketball with my friend. On Sunday, I watch a football game on TV. I often help my mother do housework. I watch TV with my parents in the evening. Then I go to bed at nine o’clock. I’m very happy on weekends.

【汉语翻译】

我有一个美好的周末。星期六早上，我做我的作业。午饭后，我和我的母亲去购物。大约5点，我和我的朋友一起玩篮球。星期天，我在电视上观看足球比赛。我经常帮助妈妈做家务。晚上我和我的父母看电视。然后我在九点钟去睡觉。周末我很快乐。

✎.十四.以 My Favorite…为题，写一篇短文。

【参考范文】

My Favorite Subject

My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. I have English every day. I can speak a little English. I join the school English club. Every afternoon I go there to talk in English. I can see English movies and read English books. I think it is useful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.

【汉语翻译】

我最喜欢的科目

我最喜欢的科目是英语。我喜欢它，因为它很有趣。我每一天都上英语课。我会讲一点英语。我参加了学校的英语俱乐部。每天下午我去那里用英语交谈。我可以看英文电影和阅读英文书籍。我想这对我来说是有用的。我想学好它。我非常喜欢英语。

✎.十五.用英语介绍你的一日三餐。

【参考范文】

Hello, everyone! I don’t like sports, but I like eating very much. I eat a lot food every day. For breakfast, I like milk, eggs and bread a lot . For lunch, I like French fries, chicken, hamburgers and apples. For dinnerr, I like fruits, vegetables and rice.

【汉语翻译】

嗨，大家好！我不喜欢运动，但我很喜欢吃。我每天吃很多食物。早餐，我非常喜欢牛奶，鸡蛋和面包。午餐，我喜欢薯条，鸡肉，汉堡包和苹果。对于晚餐，我喜欢水果，蔬菜和米饭。

✎.十六 以My Day为题写一篇英语短文。

【参考范文】My Day

I get up early at six every day. After doing some morning exercises, I read English for twenty minutes. At seven I have breakfast. After breakfast I take my schoolbag and go to school. Our class begins at eight, and we have four classes in the morning. After lunch at 12 o’clock, I take a short rest in the classroom. We have three more classes in the afternoon. Afterschoolat five , I go back home. I often help my mother do some housework. Sometimes I watch TV. After dinner, I begin to do my homework. Then I take a shower. I go to bed at nine thirty.

【汉语翻译】我的一天

我每天早上六点起床。做了早操后，我读英语20分钟。七点吃早餐。早饭后，我带上我的书包去上学。我们的课在八点开始，早上我们上4节课。12点吃完午饭后，我在教室里稍微休息一下。下午，我们还有3节课。5点放学后，我回家。我经常帮我的妈妈做一些家务。有时候我看电视。晚饭后，我开始做我的作业。然后我淋浴。我九点半上床睡觉。

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