英语四级写作

发布于 2021-08-14 16:07 ，所属分类：大学英语学习资料

我，屯干货

August 10th

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Do you think universities should raise professors' salaries in order to improve the quality of education? Give your reasons.

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the quality of education,especially that of higher education. Among the varied solutions aimed to improve education quality, personally believe that raising professors'salaries is one of the effective methods.

First of all, it is quite clear that higher salaries can attract capable professors who hope that their values can be acknowledged through decent earnings. Meanwhile, the brain drain problem can be alleviated to some extent. Next, with higher income professors are more willing to enhance their abilities and pursue further study in famous academic centers, where they will become more competent to provide quality education. Moreover, higher salaries for professors will also free them from daily distractions such as worries about living

expenses. In this way they can focus more on teaching.

Given the factors that I have just outlined, I suggest that universities hike professors' salaries so as to stimulate them to improve the teaching quality.

范文点评:

1.开篇提出问题:教育质量问题引起人们广泛。

2.提出自己的观点提高大学教授的薪资是一个行之有效的办法。

3.承接上文，说明自己的第一个理由:通过薪资体现教授的价值。

4.继续阐述理由:缓解人才流失问题。

5.进一步延伸:教授可以利用自己的薪资进修，以提高教学水平。

6.最后一个理由:高薪让教授在生活方面无后顾之忧，继而专心教学。

7.总结全文，提出建议:提高教授薪资，以激励他们提高教学质量。

句法点评:

1. First of all, it is quite clear that higher salaries can attract capable professors who hope that their values can be acknowledged through decent earnings.

本句采用了主语从句句型，即"it is +形容词+ that..."其中，it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句。

2. Next, with higher income professors are more willing to enhance their abilities and pursuefurther study in famous academic centers, where they will become more competent to provide quality education.

本句中，where引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是academic centers。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120words but no more than 180 words. Which is better, a challenging plan for one's future or a practical plan for one's future? Give your reasons.

Making a challenging plan or a practical plan for one's future becomes the bone of contention as more and more people prefer to plan their lives in advance. However, as far as I am concerned, a practical plan will be the prior choice.

To begin with,it is far more difficult to carry out a challenging plan since it is intangible while a practical plan is more feasible. Secondly, a practical plan generally matches one's

competence, serving as a guide for him to make progress with ease. Furthermore, one will be encouraged and cheered up by the implementation of a practical plan. Supposing that one always has to struggle with a challenging plan and consequently becomes frustrated, what benefits will he get out of such a plan?

Therefore, from my perspective, I would like to suggest people craft a practical plan considering that it can contribute to their final success and promise them a better future.

范文点评:

1.开篇明确提出争议焦点:该制定切合实际的计划，还是富有挑战性的计划?

2.就上文提到的争议，表明自己倾向于切合实际的计划。

3.阐述第一个理由:挑战性计划具有不可预测性，而保守计划更切合实际。

4.第二个理由:切合实际的计划能与个人能力更完美地四配。

5.第三个理由:切合实际的计划更容易实现，让人们受到鼓舞，反之，人们容易受挫，不易成功。

6.呼应上文，重申观点。

句法点评:

1. Making a challenging plan or a practical plan for one's future becomes the bone of contention as more and more people prefer to plan their lives in advance.

本句主干为主系表结构，making引导的动名词短语做主语，表语是bone of contention。需要注意，本句中as引导原因状语从句。又如:I don't know how to get to the railway station as I am new here.我不知道怎么去火车站，因为我刚到这里。

2. Therefore, from my perspective, I would like to suggest people craft a practical plan considering that it can contribute to their final success and promise them a better future. 在本句中使用了suggest接that宾语从句表建议的句型(that可省略)，宾语从句中谓语动词需用should +do(动词原形)的结构，should可以省略，表示“建议某人做某事”。considering that...意为"考虑到... , 鉴于... "considering为现在分词，that引导宾语从句。又如: I suggest we telephone her in an hour.我建议我们一个小时后再给她打电话。/Considering that she was old, he sent her to a nursing home.考虑到她已经年迈，他把她送到了养老院。

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