2021年高考英语传统文化短填与热点话题作文预测(四)
发布于 2021-05-09 15:34 ,所属分类:中小学英语考试学习资料
一、传统文化短文填空预测(4)
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二、热点话题作文预测(4)
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, everyone.
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That's all. Thank you for listening.
【答案】
Good morning, everyone.
It’s my great honor to be here and give a speech on saving food.
Speaking of food, there are two ugly truths. First, a huge amount of food is wasted every year. Millions of tons of cooked and served food ends up in trash cans. Second, primary and secondary school students are among the top three food wasters.
At present, China is still heavily dependent on the import of certain grains, and wasting food will make our efforts to be self-sufficient in vain. Moreover, wasting food also means wasting resources like water, land and energy. Therefore, it will damage the environment in the long run.
Realizing the severe consequences of wasting food, I’ve been doing my bit to save food. At the school cafeteria, I ask for half-size servings when I’m not hungry. When dining out in restaurants with family or friends, I propose ordering smaller portions and taking the leftovers home. At home, I check the fridge before making shopping plans to avoid buying more food than we actually need.
Saving food benefits every one of us. Let’s clean our plates today so that we can have enough for tomorrow.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类写作,要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了减少舌尖上的浪费,你校英语俱乐部拟举办有关“爱惜食物,从我做起”的英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:1. 食物浪费的现象及危害;2. 你爱惜食物的做法;3.你的倡议。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):give a speech on (发表演讲);speak of(谈到);truth(真相);a huge amount of(大量的);end up (结束);be heavily dependent on(严重依赖于);self-sufficient(自给自足的);in vain(徒劳地);in the long run(长远);severe consequence(严重后果);do one’s bit(尽自己的一份力量);propose (建议);leftover(残羹剩菜);avoid doing sth.(避免做某事);benefit(有助于)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Moreover, wasting food also means wasting resources like water, land and energy.是用来动名词作主语;At the school cafeteria, I ask for half-size servings when I’m not hungry.运用了时间状语从句;Let’s clean our plates today so that we can have enough for tomorrow.运用了目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
撰 稿:卿海银
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