2018年上海高考英语作文

2018年上海高考英语作文：

假设你是明启中学高三学生卢平，校英文报向高三学生正文，题目是“My Teachers”，你想要投稿，内容必须包括：
①把你遇到过的老师分类；
②具体描述每一类老师的特征。

1.对遇到过的老师进行分类
2.具体描述每一类老师的特征

分析题干，乍一看仿佛是初中的话题。从内容上而言，My Teachers看似简单，但其对学生的要求实则不低。首先，将teachers具体分为几类，每类该如何命名和定义；其次，分类之后又该如何进行细节阐述。即，需要给出能让自己有话可说，并且能符合自己分类定义的素材。

简单分类，会以性别分、以年龄分、以和蔼或严厉来分等。

但，不管怎么分，其实，关键在于需要后续的论据。本文的难点在于，论据不好写，就会显得论点和论据脱节，逻辑链跟不上。

范文：

On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous teachers we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping our characteristics. Looking back on my school life, my teachers can be generally classified into two types: dedicated, approachable.

Dedicated teachers are most popular among students not only because of their outstanding professional knowledge but also because of their devotion to the career of teaching. You can expect more than class time of them. They may have a face-to-face communication with you after class to enlighten you with a tricky problem. They may sacrifice their off-duty time to keep you company so that you can smooth your emotional problem caused by your own family. Needless to say, most teachers fall into this category.

The second type of teacher may seem less qualified in terms of their teaching skills, but they can also easily win students’ hearts because they can be entrusted with our deepest secrets. Childhood and adolescence are awkward periods when we struggle to explore our own way in the world. Our peers may be just as inexperienced as us while our parents seemingly live on another planet. So a friendly adult like approachable teachers can be a life saver.

In the future, as my learning continues, I will have opportunities to meet more teachers. Whereas, never will I forget the assistance from my previous teachers or their passion for knowledge.

此外，贴出一位同学的习作，本文另辟蹊径，用比喻的手法写不同的老师分类。以供参考。

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