小作文攻略之第二段

发布于 2021-11-04 13:00 ,所属分类:高中作文素材大全

捉!

所有能考到的信件类型第一段如何开头已经给大家推完啦!

戳下方我们回顾:

小作文第一段攻略之建议信+邀请信+道歉信

小作文第一段攻略之投诉信+推荐信+感谢信

小作文攻略之祝贺信+求职信+辞职信+介绍信+告示+备忘录

今天我们进行第二段的写作讲解


小作文第二段一般根据具体的情境,写出3-4句话即可

首先我们总结了一些必备句型:

01
框架类

(一)层次类

1.首先: to begin with, to start with, for a start, first and foremost

2.其次:what’s more, besides, in addition, additionally, furthermore

3.最后:in the end, still, last but not least, finally

(二)逻辑类

1.原因:owing to, because +句子,because of+短语,due to

2.结果:therefore, as a result, hence

3.转折&让步:although, even if, nevertheless, even though, however, but, while, by contrast

4.举例:for instance, for example+句子,such as+短语,take...for example

5.个人观点:from where I stand, as far as I am concerned, as for me

【小作文不需要用很大的逻辑词,否则显得太卖弄了哈哈】


02
必备句型



①There is no denying that +句子/ there is no doubt that...

e.g. There is no denying that you are very familiar with this field, so we believe you can provide us with some useful instructions.

不可否认,您对这个领域非常熟悉,所以我们相信您可以为我们提供一些有用的指导。

②...enable sb to do sth 使....能够做

e.g. Doing sports enables us to feel relaxed when we are tired.

③Compared with...,... (前后一般进行对比,比如和你们工作要求相比,我没有足够的能力去完成工作)

e.g. Compared with your carefulness, I am so careless to take your CD mistakenly.

与你的细心相比,我太不小心误拿你的CD了。

④it is +adj.+to do sth.

E.g. 提建议时:it is (not) advisable for sb to do sth

It is reasonable/advisable for the government to take immediate actions to solve the air pollution.

政府立即采取行动解决空气污染问题是合理的。

⑤...have a great influence on 对...有很大的影响

e.g. Reading more books has a great influence on you future life.

⑥do harm to 对...有害

Throwing plastic bags everywhere does harm to our environment.

到处扔塑料袋会损害我们的环境。

⑦...will bring you opportunities to A, B as well as C. 使用排比句增加句子长度

E.g. These activities will bring you opportunities to broaden your horizons, release your pressure as well as find a good job in the future.

这些活动将为你带来拓宽视野、释放压力,并在未来找到一份好工作的机会。

⑧注意:pay more attention to/ focus all my eyesight on

e.g. I think our government should paymore attention to the air pollution.

⑨sb be supposed to 某人应该做...

e.g. You are supposed to take part in some clubs in the university because it is the best opportunity for you to enhance your ability.

你应该在大学里参加一些俱乐部,因为这是你提高自己能力的最佳机会。

⑩The most effective way to....is....

E.g. The most effective way to raise students’ awareness on athletics is to give sport courses a more central role.

提高学生对体育意识最有效的方法是让体育课程发挥更重要的作用。

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扩充素材


素材可以背诵我们总结出来的主题词汇总,每个主题词选择几个单词用上面的句型组成句子即可。或者我们会有每日两句的推送,可以去背。我给大家选择了几个万能的理由。


1.考研考试

【拒绝】我在准备考研,所以不能参加你的活动。

【建议】我们在准备考研,所以希望图书馆增加座位。

【投诉】我在准备考研,买了你家的电子设备坏了很耽误我的时间。

e.g. Since many students are preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduate, it is advisable for your library to provide us more seats.

由于许多学生都在准备全国研究生入学考试,建议您的图书馆为我们提供更多的座位。


2.好处写排比句

扩展视野,放松身心,享受...之旅,对生活的热爱,身体健康

E.g. Your warmhearted help enabled us to enjoy the trip to study, arouse our enthusiasm as well as broadenour horizons.

您热心的帮助使我们能够享受学习之旅,激发了我们的热情,也拓宽了我们的视野。


3.介绍地点

推荐景点等地点时,可以描写当地的美食、建筑、历史等

e.g. Beijing is characterized by its traditional food, diverse architecture as well as long history.

北京具有传统美食、多种多样的建筑和悠久的历史。

除此之外还可以用a rich store of invaluable artifacts(丰富的珍贵文物)


4.书籍和电影推荐

描述理由:①fast-paced, exciting story line 紧凑、刺激的故事情节

②special effects are breathtaking 特效扣人心弦

③its directing(writer) is great 导演(作者)出色

④the story can be incredibly enlightening 故事及其具有启发性

⑤It is distinguished from its kind for its matchless artistic value.

它以其无与伦比的艺术价值而与其他书不同。


真题举例

You are going to host a club reading session, write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members.

You should state reasons for your recommendation.


【例文】


Dear Club Members,

I am writing this letter to recommend one of my favourite books for the club reading session to be held next Sunday.

I am delighted tointroduce the book called David Copperfield, one of Dickens’ novels, which traces the life of a man from turbulent childhood and teenage years to final inner peace and happiness. The book is characterized byits enlightening story plot, which tells us about the beauty of life. Besides, it is distinguished from its kind for its matchless artistic value.

I give my highest recommendations without reservation and I would be pleased to answer any additional questions you may have.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

翻译:

亲爱的俱乐部成员,

我写这封信是为了向下周日举行的俱乐部阅读会议推荐我最喜欢的书之一。

我很高兴地介绍这本名为大卫·科波菲尔的书,这是狄更斯的小说之一,它追溯了一个人的生活,从动荡的童年和青少年时期到最终的内心的和平与幸福。这本书的特点是其具有启发性的故事情节,它告诉我们生活之美。此外,它还因其无与伦比的艺术价值而与众不同。

我毫无保留地给了我最高的建议,我很乐意回答你可能有的任何其他问题。

你的真诚地,

李明

大家别忘了去看次条推文呀!

果然小作文来了,大作文被你们抛弃了~

近几天推送的句子很万能!不看错亿!

快去围观哈!

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