雅思写作(20201112)│具备竞争力对个人的影响

发布于 2021-09-05 10:51 ，所属分类：初中作文学习资料

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今天带来的是雅思写作7分范文学习笔记，选自机经真题。

本期我们来看看社会类话题

Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have in society. How does this competitiveness affect individuals? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

（当今社会竞争能力是个人应该拥有的重要能力。竞争能力是如何影响到个人的？你认为竞争是好是坏？）

先来个头脑风暴，have a try~

问题：具备竞争力对个人的影响

你可以给出哪些观点？

看完本期内容，你会有答案~

7分范文

In this contemporary era which features high pressure and fierce competitions, owning core competitivenessin onespecific domain is a powerful tool on modern people’s way to success, as a result of which, it is not uncommon to see that an increasing number of individuals spare no effort and energy to achieve this goal.

There is no doubt that the vital role that the superior competitive capability plays in the success of individuals is widely accepted. First and foremost, such a character serves as an essential means of motivation to push people to work harder and acquire more skills, hence contributing to a more prosperous career path since when people are aware of the significance of keeping making progress and striving to be the first, they tend to be moreproductive. It is competitiveness that enables individuals to equip with self-motivation and self-discipline that are deemed as indispensable factors for overcoming barriers as well as resisting temptation when devoting to work or studies. Additionally, people with stronger competitive ability are more likely to have courage and persistence to challenge tasks which cannot be completed by ordinary people，in other words, they are more capable to break down the routine as well as to fight for what they believe in.

Unfortunately, people who lose this feature are hardly to pursue their goals or make themselves come out on the top.Vicious competition, however, is often thought to be connected with the greed or an addiction to power. In that case, those people easily slip out of control and head for crime. What’s worse, such a conduct would have an adverse effect on the interpersonal relationship, making people more selfish and self-centered who would turn a blind eye to people around them. For instance, when children are frequently infused the importance of competing with peers, there is a greater possibility that they would refuse to share information, give a helping hand or even adopt a hostile attitude towards others who are regarded as a potential competitor, which is definitely in contradiction with teamwork highly promoted in modern society.

In a nutshell, competitive ability is one of the most crucial characteristics for human beings, which gives us goals and pushes us to lead a life filled with satisfaction and glory. However, it is worth mentioning that the excessive pursuit of this quality can trigger a series of side effects on the moral values as well as human relations.

接下来，我们来分析范文的结构及观点。

段落一（开头段）

【背景信息+作者观点】In this contemporary era which features high pressure and fierce competitions, owning core competitivenessin onespecific domain is a powerful tool on modern people’s way to success, as a result of which, it is not uncommon to see that an increasing number of individuals spare no effort and energy to achieve this goal.

参考译文：在当代的高压和激烈的竞争中，拥有核心竞争力在特定领域对于现代人的成功是一个强大的工具，因此，并不少见看到越来越多的人竭尽全力来实现人生目标。

【语料积累】feature作动词表示以…为特点

【语料积累】spare no effort and energy to do sth.尽全力做某事

段落二（主体段一）

【积极影响】①There is no doubt that the vital role that the superior competitive capability plays in the success of individuals is widely accepted. ②First and foremost, such a character serves as an essential means of motivation to push people to work harder and acquire more skills, hence contributing to a more prosperous career path since when people are aware of the significance of keeping making progress and striving to be the first, they tend to be more productive. It is competitiveness that enables individuals to equip with self-motivation and self-discipline that are deemed as indispensable factors for overcoming barriers as well as resisting temptation when devoting towork or studies. ③Additionally, people with stronger competitive ability are more likely to have courage and persistence to challenge tasks which cannot be completed by ordinary people，in other words, they are more capable to break down the routine as well as to fight for what they believe in.

【论点】】①There is no doubt that the vital role that the superior competitive capability plays in the success of individuals is widely accepted.

参考译文：毫无疑问，卓越的竞争力在个人成功中发挥的重要作用已被广泛认可。

【影响一】②First and foremost, such a character serves as an essential means of motivation to push people to work harder and acquire more skills, hence contributing to a more prosperous career path since when people are aware of the significance of keeping making progress and striving to be the first, they tend to be more productive. It is competitiveness that enables individuals to equip with self-motivation and self-discipline that are deemed as indispensable factors for overcoming barriers as well as resisting temptation when devoting to work or studies.

参考译文：首先，这样的角色作为一个推动人们更努力工作并获得更多技能的重要手段，因此有助于一个更成功的事业道路，因为当人们意识到保持进步和努力成为首要的重要性，他们往往更有动力。正是竞争力使个人能够自我激励和自律，这些自律被认为是在投入工作或学习时克服障碍和抵抗诱惑的不可或缺的因素。

【语料积累】serve as an essential means of doing sth.作为一个做某事的重要手段

【语料积累】equip with配备/装备

【语料积累】be deemed as indispensable factors for doing sth.被认为是做某事不可或缺的因素

【影响二】③Additionally, people with stronger competitiveability are more likely to have courage and persistence to challenge tasks which cannot be completed by ordinary people，in other words, they are more capable to break down the routine as well as to fight for what they believe in.

参考译文：此外，竞争力较强的人更有勇气和毅力来挑战普通人无法完成的任务，换句话说，他们更有能力打破常规，为自己的信仰而战。

【语料积累】break down the routine打破常规

段落三（主体段二）

【消极影响】①Unfortunately, people who lose this feature are hardly to pursue their goals or make themselves come out on the top. Vicious competition, however, is often thought to be connected with the greed or an addiction to power. In that case, those people easily slip out of control and head for crime. ②What’s worse, such a conduct would have an adverse effect on the interpersonal relationship, making people more selfish and self-centered who would turn a blind eye to people around them. For instance, when children are frequently infused the importance of competing with peers, there is a greater possibility that they would refuse to share information, give a helping hand or even adopt a hostile attitude towards others who are regarded as a potential competitor, which is definitely in contradiction with teamwork highly promoted in modern society.

【影响一】①Unfortunately, people who lose this feature are hardly to pursue their goals or make themselves come out on the top. Vicious competition, however, is often thought to be connected with the greed or an addiction to power. In that case, those people easily slip out of control and head for crime.

参考译文：不幸的是，失去这个功能的人很难追求他们的目标或让自己达到顶峰。然而，恶性竞争通常被认为与贪婪或对权力上瘾有关。在这种情况下，这些人很容易失控，走向犯罪。

【语料积累】vicious competition恶性竞争

【语料积累】slip out of control失控

【语料积累】head for crime走向犯罪

【影响二】②What’s worse, such a conduct would have an adverse effect on the interpersonal relationship, making people more selfish and self-centered who would turn a blind eye to people around them. For instance, when children are frequently infused the importance of competing withpeers, there is a greater possibility that they would refuse to share information, give a helping hand or even adopt a hostile attitude towards others who are regarded as a potential competitor, which is definitely in contradiction with teamwork highly promoted in modern society.

参考译文：更糟糕的是，这样的行为会对人际关系产生不利影响，使人们更加自我和自私，他们会对周围的人视而不见。例如，当孩子经常注入与同龄人竞争的重要性，有更大可能，他们会拒绝分享信息，给予帮助，甚至对被视为潜在竞争对手的其他人采取敌意态度，这绝对是与现代社会倡导的团队合作是矛盾的。

【语料积累】adverse effect不利影响

【语料积累】turn a blind eye to sb.对某人视而不见

【语料积累】adopt a hostile attitude towards sb.对某人采取敌意态度

【语料积累】in contradiction with与…相矛盾

段落四（结尾段：总结）

【发展旅游业】In a nutshell, competitive ability is one of the most crucial characteristics for human beings, which gives us goals and pushes us to lead a life filled with satisfaction and glory. However, it is worth mentioning that the excessive pursuit of this quality can trigger a series of side effects on the moral values as well as human relations.

参考译文：简而言之，竞争能力是人类最关键的特征之一，它赋予了我们目标，并推动我们过着充满满足和荣耀的生活。然而，值得一提的是，对这种品质的过度追求可能会对道德价值观和人际关系引发一系列的副作用。

【语料积累】excessive pursuit过度的追求

【语料积累】trigger a series of side effects引发一系列副作用

综上所述，范文的结构是：开头段（背景信息+作者观点）+主体段一（积极影响=努力+勇气）+主体段二（消极影响=犯罪+自私）+ 结尾段（总结=有利有弊），这也是观点类写作的作文结构。