暑假英语过渡:高分作文技巧整理,考试+20分不是问题!

发布于 2021-08-09 19:38 ,所属分类:初中作文学习资料



如何写好初中英语作文?阅卷老师喜欢什么样的作文呢?结合近几年的中考作文的评分标准以及阅卷经验,王老师给同学们总结了作文拿高分的技巧,供大家参考。今天和大家分享的是初二暑假英语过渡:高分作文技巧整理,考试+5分不是问题!

1.中心明确

一篇好的文章,最起码的条件是有统一性,即主题思想明确。引用的每个材料,写的每一句话都要紧扣中心,为中心服务。写作时一定要牢记一篇文章只有一个中心,确保文章前后一致,主题明确。

如某中考题要求根据两幅画的提示写一封回信,介绍学校的变化。有的考生一开始就点题:学校发生了翻天覆地的变化(Many great changes have taken place in this school.)。而从后面的语句看,并没有将变化的“巨大”体现出来,上下文矛盾,根本没抓住“巨大变化”这个中心。


2.连续流畅

中考书面表达要求文章语言通顺流畅。因此,句与句之间、段与段之间的衔接、过渡应自然,层次要分明,合乎逻辑。写作文时,要善于运用过渡词使文章过渡自然、和谐统一。如果考生恰当地使用了then,after,until等词来连接上下句,会使文章更通顺、流畅。

3.语言得体

“人靠衣装,零散文靠框”,文章的内容要靠语言来组织、表达。

(1)写作时应尽量避免使用冗长、复杂、易犯错误的句子,用简洁、精练的语句表达,做到言简意赅。

(2)写作前把要表达的内容整理归纳,理清思路,做到条理分明,要点齐全,切忌逐词逐句按汉语方式翻译,生编硬造。

(3)写文章不是记流水账,在能清楚表达文章内容的前提下,尽量措辞有加,不时出现“闪光点”,这将为你的文章增光添彩。


1.应用文,包括启事、通知、书信、日记、e-mail等形式。

2.图表式作文,多为介绍说明性质,所以基本时态一般为一般现在时。一般情况下,题目会给出提示句。

3.话题作文,通常会给出一个确定的主题及简单的要求,只要抓住主题所体现的中心思想,不出现拼写、语法错误,语言流畅,有文采即可。

四、善于用衔接句

①表示列举和顺序:

first, second, third ...; firstly, secondly, thirdly ...;

for one thing ... (and) for another (thing);

to begin / start with, next, then,

finally / last / lastly / last but not least

②表示举例:

like; for example; such as; as you know;

as we all know

③表示语义增进和引申:

again; also; and; and then; besides;moreover;

in addition; what's more; what's worse

④表示对比和转折:

but; instead; however; still; though; although; yet;

while; on the one hand ... on the other hand ...

⑤表示语义等同和改变说法:

similarly; in the same way; in other words;

that is; that is to say

⑥表示过渡和总结:

now; by the way; all in all; in short; in a word

⑦表示结果和推论:

as a result; for this/that reason; in that case; so;

therefore...

五、句式应多样化

①用状语从句:

As soon as I see him, I'll tell him the news.

He didn't have supper until his parents came back.

I was so angry that I couldn't say a word.

He is such a kind man that we all like him.

We didn't feel tired though / although we walked a long way.

The boy saved every coin so that / in order that he could buy his mother a present on Mother's Day.

You may use the dictionary as long as / so long as you keep it clean.

用定语从句:

The girl who often helps me with my English is from England.

Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.

②用感叹句

What a wonderful film we saw last night!

How hard he works!

③用被动语态

I'm not allowed to go out at night.

Who was praised by Miss Li?

The old must be taken good care of.

④他句型的使用

By doing ..., you / we can ...

I'm not sure whether / if ...

I think / suggest you should ...

In order (not) to ..., you / we should ...

六、使用谚语为文章增色

Actions speak louder than words.

行动比语言更响亮。

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

患难见真情。

A friend is easier lost than found.

得朋友难,失朋友易。

A good beginning makes a good ending. / Well begun is

half done.

好的开端是成功的一半。

A good book is a good friend.

好书如挚友。

A man becomes learned by asking questions.

不耻下问才能有学问。

A mother's love never changes.

母爱永恒。

A thousand mile trip begins with one step.

千里之行,始于足下。

Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.

自信是走向成功的第一步。

七、注意篇章结构

合理布局一般为三段式:

开始部分——说出文中的要点、核心问题。

正文部分——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。

结尾部分——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,覆盖所有命题要点、连贯。前后呼应,去除与主题无关的内容。书写工整,字迹优美,高分必备!






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